You haven't replied to either of the messages I posted to help you earlier. Please do so.
Your previous attempt appeared to work using SQLCMD - but as you did not save the output to a file, if there were any errors you won't have been able to see them as they scrolled up the screen and you can't check the file, retrospectively, to check for any errors. (In any event the output would have been huge, so trying to find any errors in such a file would be a "challenge")
I think it is very unlikely that, without more knowledge about MS SQL than you have, that you will be able to "just use" the SQL script that you have. Therefore I suggest that you either ask the person who sent you the SQL script to, instead, send you a Full Backup File (which it will be easy for people here to help you restore onto your computer), or you ask someone with more MS SQL knowledge to modify your script so that it will run safely on your machine and create the database etc.
The reason I say this is that it is likely that your script uses a specifically named database, and creates it on a specifically named drive in specifically named folders (all/any of which may not exist on your computer). There are a whole host of similar things which could go wrong which someone with a bit of MS SQL knowledge will easily be able to solve but if you do it on your own, with the help of a forum like this, it will take "for ever" and may well destroy something useful (e.g. by overwriting it, or deleting it) on your computer.
Links to my earlier posts:
forums.sqlteam.com/t/download-ms-sql-server-management-studio-express/4708/41
forums.sqlteam.com/t/download-ms-sql-server-management-studio-express/4708/32